Leaving Atonement

 

 

Scene – sunset contemplation

Miriam’s anxiety builds as her betrothed is soon to come home.  She longs for their innocent love, for his friendship, for their romance, for life to be good and full of promise again.  She misses her family.  She knows she will be called “dead” as soon as Yaacov returns, closing the door forever to seeing her real life again.  She does not want to die, to lose Yaacov, to be so far from all that is her life.  Here, she feels she is mis-fit with her cousins, even though they have reconciled.  Miriam goes to her cousin who is head of the home and asks to leave to return to her family.  He lets her go.  There is a fond parting with all.
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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