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Scene – Miriam at Orna’s house, 11 years old

Orna’s family home is a neighborhood gathering spot for children and friends.  A very friendly family, casual, everyone feels welcome.  A contrast to Miriam’s more formal family atmosphere.  Enjoyable sharing of tasks, making dinner.  Refaela does some heavy lifting while cooking.  Mother, Bina, starts to cluck and over-protect, but Rafaela chirps that she is gaining strength; it has been 10 months – I am getting very strong now mother!  The family prays at the meal, as followers of Christ.  Miriam watches, listens, absorbs it.
 

 

 

 

 

 

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